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NARRATIVE FILMS/STYLES

of special interest to editors are many and varied. The following is a short list of moments within narrative films placed in categories that I find useful for myself as an editor. Click below to download. For Mac, Option+Click to download as Word file; for PC, right click. Download as "text file with line breaks" only if your computer does not support Word:

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NARRATIVE FILM EXAMPLES FOR EDITORS

CONTENTS

ACTION SEQUENCES
BLACK & WHITE WITH COLOR
COMEDY
CUTAWAYS
DIALOGUE
DREAM SEQUENCES
DYNAMIC ARTICULATIONS
EDITING ISSUES
FILMING IN SMALL SPACE
IMPROVISATION
JUMPCUTS
LCUTS
LOVE SCENES
MASTER SHOTS
MATCHES

METAPHORS
MONTAGE SEQUENCES
MOVING/STATIONARY IMAGE
MUSIC
NARRATION
NARRATIVE: NON-CHRONOLOGICAL
OFFSCREEN SPACE
PACING

PARALLEL EDITING & CROSSCUTTING

PATRIARCHIAL POV
POINT OF VIEW
SEPARATION OF CHARACTERS
SEQUENCE STYLE CHANGE
SOUND
SOUND DESIGN
TAKES: LONG & SHORT
TIME: EXPANSION & COMPRESSION
TITLES AS CHAPTER HEADINGS
UNDERSTATEMENT
VALUES VERSUS MATCHES

 

 


BLACK & WHITE WITH COLOR

HIGH AND LOW
2 shots of pink smoke coming out of smokestack

NIGHT AND FOG
color = present, b&w = past.

WINGS OF DESIRE

UNSTRUNG HEROES
mix of home movie footage

MALCOLM X
mix of b/w 16mm newsfootage with "actual" event in color.

 

COMEDY

RAISING ARIZONA

SOME LIKE IT HOT

 

DIALOGUE

CHINATOWN, V9375
2 characters: Mrs. Mulwray goes to JJ’s office to hire him.

DAMAGE, Louis Malle
2 characters: Irons meets Binoche at party. MCU’s with minimal dialogue, but held together with intense mutual gaze. Notice man approaching out of focus and /cut/approaching farther out than the continuity would suggest.

3 characters: Anna, Peter & Irons in Anna’s apartment.

FORCE OF EVIL, Abraham Polonsky
Dialogue as vehicle for dramatic action and as musically organized sound.

2 characters: Dialogue filled with alliterations, dissonant rhythmes and rhythmical effects serving as a relay for sound effects as when knocks on a door repeat the rhythm and timbre of the preceeding dialogue.

HIS GIRL FRIDAY, Howard Hawks, 1940.
3 characters: overlapping dialogue during dinner scene at bar. Gestures.

LOWER DEPTHS, Kurosawa
Multiple characters: Card playing scene where the dialogue is "orchestrated" musically.

LOVE AFFAIR, Leo McCarey. "Looks" between Boyer and Dunne coming after their spoken lines because they are in reaction to their own words. This forces the editor to stay on the CU after the words are delivered. This is highly unusual. The scene’s strength comes entirely on the ‘looks" as opposed to what is said.

GOODFELLAS, Scorcese.
Joe Pesci’s baiting of hero in restaurant.

"DREAM" SEQUENCES

Diagetic time and space are radically altered by a move into the interior space of a character.

BUFFALO 66
Bar scene in which hero approaches the place kicker and enacts killing him and then changes his mind and walks out.

THE CELEBRATION
Scene when Christian falls to floor and his dead sisters appears to him.

THE SHINING
little boy asking mirror what will happen at the Hotel, then blood runs from elevators

BARCELONA, by Still Whitman.
Man leaves hospital room to meet woman he expects to see and projects that reality with accompanying music and then meets a different woman.

TV COMMERCIALS
in general

CLOCKWORK ORANGE
kid in prison

EDITING ISSUES

ACTION SEQUENCES

AMERICAN FRIEND

FRENCH CONNECTION

NAKED CITY, Jules Dassin, edited by Waxworth
See Reisz, pps.

NORTH BY NORTHWEST

STAGE COACH

CUTAWAYS

PROVIDENCE, V6727
Cutaways to telephone without motivation during scene in bedroom with son, mother, and soccer playing son. After second cutaway, narrator understands the possibility of the cutaway and "uses’ it.

DYNAMIC ARTICULATIONS

OTHELLO
Static shots alternating with extremely rapid tracking shots.

JUMPCUTS

HUSBANDS AND WIVES, dir. Woody Allen, editor: Susan E. Morse
Allen does not let cast know the whole story.
handheld camera, wildly panning. This style forces jumpcuts.
Editor must decide how important the content is, then use jumpcut.
First scene: we are clued early that jumpcuts will be used.
Interviews: used as pacing device, and as camera as therapy device.

DAMAGE, editor John Bloom
Jumpcuts during first love scene.

L-CUTS

THE PLAYER, Altman, 1970, V9729
Extended Lcut after Robbins kills the writer and camera dollies in to the body in the alley and we hear pre-meeting business chit chat for 22 seconds ahead of the next scene.

 

MASTER SHOTS

CRIMES AND MISDEMEANORS, edited by Susan Morse.
Beginning of film: establishing shot, lots of space.
Difference between shots in the medical wing and Dolores’ apartment.
Dolores screws up the line and the editor felt it to be convincing so she left it in.

THE VERDICT
Entire telephone scene in office shot as Master shot:
45 minutes into film: lawyer takes telephone call to plea bargain.
There is a lot of psychological action.
Speculation: Paul Newman is carrying scene off emotionally. So editor must ask yourself: do I break into this scene through editing?

MATCHES

OTHELLO
Actor begins movement/cut/actor has already completed movement.
Actor motionless/cut/actor completes movement.

MONTAGE SEQUENCES

ALL THAT JAZZ

DAYS OF HEAVEN
harvesting scenes

HUSTLER, THE 1961

PERSONA V6237
Beginning sequence

WITNESS
barn building

GHOSTBUSTERS II
City preparing for ghostbuster team

GOODFELLAS
Montage sequence of wives and girlfriends of wife at party.

PERSONA V6237

PARALLEL EDITING & CROSS-CUTTING

DON’T LOOK NOW
cross-cutting

EDVARD MUNCH, Peter Watkins
multple space/time audio and visual cuts

GODFATHER
Parallel cuts at baptism/killings)

KILLING, THE Kubrick
What each member of the gang did, going backwards in chronological time.

MALCOLM X
cutting of X’s speech, X watching his own speech, CIA listening in, etc.

PAWNBROKER
parallel cutting between Jesus + girlfriend & Broker + Jewish woman.

SILENCE OF THE LAMBS
last scenes in two separate houses. Suspense

STRANGERS ON A TRAIN, V6250
Parallel cutting on feet approaching train.

SEPARATION OF CHARACTERS

CASABLANCA, V6249
When Lisa and Rick meet for the first time in Rick’s club. 27 second CU of Lisa, etc. Two lovers kept separate for 50 seconds.

TAKES: LONG & SHORT

LONG

RULES OF THE GAME
Early days of deep focus.
Long takes force your hand in terms of editing.
Bazin: democratizing the view of the audience.
Crab dolly.: goes in and out, and laterally, and up and down.
how do the two men get to the couch?

A BIGGER SPLASH
Kasmim waiting for Hockney at beginning of film.
Mo sitting at table doing nothing, with vo.

RED SORGHUM
camera at ground level looking at sorghum, then it is leveled by workers driven by Japanese as the camera rises and perceives what has happened to the entire surrounding countryside.

SEQUENCE STYLE CHANGE

EAST OF EDEN
Raymond Massey and James Dean in father —son argument.
Suddenly, for no apparent reason, the viewer is presented with matching side slanted CU’s. Apparently unmotivated tilts. (If you must use symbols, make them clear).

 

TIME: EXPANSION & COMPRESSION

PSYCHO, V6015
shower scene, 50 shots in 2 minutes, Close ups focus on a detail of the preceeding fuller shot of Marion Crane. Increase the sense of shock by showing subjective view of murder weapon.coming down at the camera. XCU and subjective camera.

KING LEAR, Peter Brook, V7378
Death of Lear at the end: he slowly arcs backward while film crosscuts to others talking. Time greatly expanded through editing.

RAGING BULL, Scorcese V6422
LaMotta meeting Vicki at the fence at the pool. Time gently expanded.

THE GRADUATE
Benji turns around when Mrs. Robinson enters the room naked.

CARNAL KNOWLEDGE: V6003
When woman is lowering herself to give Jack a blowjob and the background wallpaper continues to slide by her as if she were lowering herself 30 feet instead of 3. Metaphor for his sinking morally.

VALUES VERSUS MATCHES


MURDER MY SWEET, scene between Marlowe and Mullow in dark office at night with flashing neon light. Dymetryk edited scene for values, ignoring the incorrect pulsing of the neon.

 

FILMING IN SMALL SPACE

GLENGARRY GLEN ROSS

HIGH AND LOW by Kurosawa.
See Noel Burch on this film.

 

IMPROVISATION

SHADOWS by Cassavetes

WHERE IS MY FRIEND’S HOUSE, Abas KIrostami

 

LOVE SCENES

DOUBLE INDEMNITY
One of the coldest love scenes ever filmed.

ANNIE HALL
Allen in bed with Shelly Duvall

THE GRADUATE,
Scene when Benji turns around when Mrs. Robinson enters the room.

BETTY BLUE
opening shot of lovers with slow track in. Frontal female & male nudity throughout film. Oral sex. Over the top. Sensational, uninteresting. French.

BOYS DON’T CRY
After the rape scene: "Hey, you ok?" Shower scene.

CARNAL KNOWLEDGE
When woman is lowering herself to give Jack a blowjob and the background wallpaper continues to slide by her as if she were lowering heself 30 feet. Metaphor for his sinking, morally.

CLOCKWORK ORANGE

HENRY: PORTRAIT OF A SERIAL KILLER
Tilted video camera on floor as the killers run after woman.

DAMAGE by MALLE
Formal framing to safeguard modesty of stars.

FULL MONTE
Scene between couple: "Who wants to see this dance?"

LA JETEE
Eyeblink scene, man looking at woman’s neck scene.

LIQUID SKY, V6258
Alien vampire sucking life force from druggies.

SOLDIER GIRLS
Private Hall comforting black recruit

PERSONA
Self-Mutilation in bed

PAWNBROKER
pareallel cutting between Jesus + girlfriend & Broker + Jewish woman.

PORNOGRAPHERS, THE

SILENCE, Bergman
Masturbation scene. Cold, desperate.

UNBEARABLE LIGHTNESS OF BEING

WINGS OF DESIRE

wOMAN IN THE DUNES

WORLD OF APO

 

METAPHORS

Motif

MARNI, color red

PSYCHO, eye motifs

Symbol

CITIZEN KANE, sled

CARNAL KNOWLEDGE: Mike Nichols, 1971, V6003
Woman is lowering herself to give Jack a blowjob and the background wallpaper continues to slide by her as if she were lowering herself 30 feet. Metaphor for his "sinking", morally.

PORNOGRAPHERS, THE
Cutting to CU of fish, and filming through fishbowl.

Metaphor

OCTOBER
cut between herded workers and herd of cattle

DON’T LOOK NOW
Cuts between water/blood on slide and child’s drowning

Allegory

SEVENTH SEAL, figure of death on the beach

Duration and Placement metaphors

PAWNBROKER, THE
Black prostitute disrobes for Steiger, flashbacks to camp with increasing rapidity.

 

 

MOVING/STATIONARY IMAGE

AX FIGHT
Middle section with stop-motion plus explanation.

LA JETEE
photographs plus one real time moving image

 

MUSIC

FILM SCORE EXAMPLES:

A married Woman, Godard

A Perfect Couple (out of print)

Altered States

Asphalt Jungle, p. 58

Beast, The

Betty Blue, V9712, score by Gabrial Yared, nouveau-Fellini.

Black Cat

Casanova (aka Fellini’s Casanova)

Cobweb, The

Crucified Lovers, V8426

Damage, Zbigniew Preisner
cello/after 1st meeting, after Family meeting, after 1st telephone call, after Anna explains how brother died.

Diva,

Double Indemnity, VD185, V11045

Down by Law

Draightsman’s Contract (out of print)

Escape from LA, CD231. Score: Shirley Walker, raw, edgy, rock. Escape from New York

Falls, The (out of print)

Forbidden Planet

Goldfinger, Guy Hamilton 1964, music by John Barry

Green Mansions, Heitor Villa Lobos

Halloween, V6136

Hamlet, directed by Grigori Kozintsev

Handmaid’s Tale, The

Haunted Summer

Housekeeping, V7408

Hunger, The

Images, Robert Altman (out of print)

King Kong, V6385

King Lear, by Peter Brook V7378

Laura

Les Abysses

Liquid Sky, V6258

Living Desert

Long Riders, V6457

Magnificent Ambersons, The p. 64, VD49

Man of Flowers

Nashville

Night Visitor

No Man’s Land, Alain Tanner

North by Northwest, Bernard Herrmann, V6416

Odds Against Tomorrow

Pather Panchali, Ravi Shankar, V8103

Peeping Tom, VD357

Pee Wee’s Big Adventure, Tim Burton

Pierrot le Fou, V10724, VD116

Player, The, V9729, Thomas Newman

Psycho, Bernard Herrmann, V6015

Raising Arizona, Carter Burwell

Runaway

Sea Hawk, The, Bernard Herrmann

Sheltering Sky, VD227

Star Trek, the Motion Picture

Star Wars, John Williams, V6425

Stranger than Paradise, V6957

Vertigo, p. 83, V6626

Vivre sa vie, V8192

Wait Until Dark

Welcome to LA, V7448, musicians perform diagetic/non-d. score on film.

Woman in the Dunes, V6541

Wuthering Heights, V6796

 

PETER’S COLLECTION: FILM SCORES ON CDs

Barry, John (excerpts from):

High Road to China

Ipcress File

Mary Queen of Scots

Monte Walsh

The Knack

The Quiller Memorandum

The Scarlet Letter

Walkabout

Cooder, Ry

The End of Violence (complete)

Herrmann, Bernard

Citizen Kane (Salammbo’s Aria)

North by Northwest, (complete)

Vertigo, Bernard Herrmann. 83, V6626 (complete)

Korngold, Erich Wolfgang

King of the Kyber Rifles (attack on mountain stronghold)

Sea Hawk (complete)

Elisabeth and Essex (Elizabeth’s theme)

Newman, Thomas

The Player (complete)

Morricone, Ennio (excerpts from):

Cinema Paradiso

Disclosure

In the Line of Fire

La Cage au Folles

Once Upon a Time In America

Once Upon a Time in the West

The Mission

Wolf

Rosza, Miklos

Julius Cesar main title sequence

Knights of the Round Table (Scherzo: hawks in flight)

Steiner, Max

Casablanca, (Caine Mutiny march)

Now, Voyager (love scene and finale

Gone with the Wind (polka)

Tiomkin, Dmitri

The Guns of Navarone prelude

The Thing from Another World suite

Waxman

Captain Blood overture

Objective, Burma! Parachute drop

Peyton Place title sequence

Williams, John

Star Wars main title

 

FILM SCORES ON CD IN COLUMBIA’S LIBRARY
THE LONGEST DAY: MUSIC FROM THE CLASSIC WAR FILMS, CD265
ESCAPE FROM LA, Shirley Walker, CD231

 

MUSIC EXAMPLES

AMISTAD

BIG CHILL

bad use of pop music overlays

BULLOCK: PHOTOGRAPHY, A WAY OF LIFE
overdone music track

CHIKEMATSU MONAGATORI (CRUCIFIED LOVERS)
structural use of sound/music throughout the film, esp. during fight in bamboo grove.

HAIL MARY
use of onscreen string quartet

KING LEAR, by Peter Brook
use of silence at beginning.

KUNDUN
(overdone music track = excellent example of what not to do.

LA CONNECTION
Jerry Goldsmith (when they drive up at night and jump over a wall)

M
use of song motif sung by murderer

STRAW DOGS
lame use of classical music.

THE SHINING, V6297
direct quotes from Bartok, Penderezcki. Superb use of pre-composed contemporary classical music.

TRANSEUROP EXPRESS
use of fragments of La Traviata

UNSTRUNG HEROES
use of neo balinese and rock music

 

NARRATION

BADLANDS

CARNAL KNOWLEDGE, V6003
two characters speak over titles

DAMAGE
End of the film: Iron’s narration

DAYS OF HEAVEN

DOUBLE INDEMNITY, VD185, V11045

MEMORANDUM, V7197
Irony, exact choice of words, intonation.

NAKED CITY, THE
Irony, from on high, goading

TWO PORTRAITS

THE SEVEN YEAR ITCH, V6421
narration throughout the entire film, by voice og god narrator at beginning, then by main character who speaks on camera.

UNIVERSAL HOTEL

 

NARRATIVE: NON-CHRONOLOGICAL

ROSHOMON, Kurasawa

PULP FICTION

RESERVOIR DOGS

THE KILLING, Kubrick
What each member of the gang did, going backwards in chronological time.

THE LAST WALTZ by Scorscese

 

 

PACING

M. HULOT’S HOLLIDAY
alternating bursts of activity with boredom

LEAVING LAS VEGAS
POV main character getting prograssively drunker, shifts from car to bar to prostitute house with disturbed or suppressed audio and cuts to black.
Shot with cop held very long.

PAWNBROKER, THE, V6244

WILD BUNCH, V6462

THE BRIDGE ON THE RIVER KWAI V6782
Bridge scene at end.

WINTER LIGHT, V6675

THE BLACK STALLION V6155

THE CONFORMIST, VD373

RAISING ARIZONA, V9097

PERSONA V6237

CABARET, V6795
Boy sings song and is joined by other Germans.

TOUCH OF EVIL, V7057
Opening sequence.

 

PATRIARCHIAL POV

DAMAGE
Binoche’s dialogue about not wanting to wake up with lover at breakfast.
End of film: love has not turned to hate.

PSYCHO
Marion gets punished for stepping into the "man’s" domain of crime.

 

POINT OF VIEW

DUAL POV:

Badlands, V6431

Beginning of film

PLATOON, by Oliver Stone V7162
(beginning scene)

HILLARY AND JACKIE

 

IMPLIED POV:

THE CONVERSATION
last 30 minutes

 

SINGLE POV:

DAYS OF HEAVEN, VD 176, V6123
VO from Mallick’s POV

UNIVERSAL HOTEL
narration

 

SUBJECTIVE POV:

BUFFALO 66
Scene in which hero brings his new girlfriend home to meet his parents and they sit around the dining room table with only three characters viewable at any one time.

DOCTOR ZHIVAGO, V6780
funeral of Yuri’s mother at beginning of film

RASHOMON VD046

HILLARY AND JACKIE
Jackie’s pov as she is losing her ability to play

 

MULTIPLE POV:

PLAYTIME, V6716

 

SOUND

APOCALYPSE Now

CHIKEMATSU MONAGATORI (CRUCIFIED LOVERS)

CONVERSATION

CRIES AND WHISPERS

FRENCH CONNECTION

King Lear, Peter Brook (SILENCE)

LEAVING LAS VEGAS
POV main character getting prograssively drunker, shifts from car to bar to prostitute house with disturbed or suppressed audio and cuts to black.
Shot with cop held very long.

NASHVILLE

ONCE UPON A TIME IN THE WEST

PERSONA

UNIVERSAL HOTEL

 

SOUND: FROM NATURAL TO ARTIFICIAL

ApocalypSe Now

Sound design goes artificial as men loose contact with reality.

THE CONVERSATION by FF Coppola
Extended scene in Harry Caul’s loft.
Continuous glimpses of his inaccessibility as a human being.
His ego rises to the bait and he gets slammed.
Sound: diagetic music, then non-diagetic, then goes into cage with diagetic.
Same dynamic at last half hour of the film.

 

SOUND: SELECTIVE HEARING

FRENCH CONNECTION
scene at bar with pop group singing, 2 cops at bar

UNIVERSAL HOTEL
sound between photographs

RAGING BULL
scenes in ring, ranging from crowd reality to bodily interiors.

LEAVING LAS VEGAS
POV main character getting progrEssively drunker, shifts from car to bar to prostitute house with disturbed or suppressed audio and cuts to black.

 

SILENCE

A WOMAN UNDER THE INFLUENCE

Scenes of discomfort when no one knows how to react to Mabel.

ApocallypSE Now

Silence: as Chief dies, and then as they make contact with Kurtz’ camp.

King Lear, Peter Brook, V7378

Totally silent beginning, then, finally, the sound of a door slamming shut begins the sound within the film.

 

 

SOUND DESIGN

32 SHORT FILMS ABOUT GLENN GOULD

APOCALYPSE NOW

CONVERSATION, THE
Mix of prerecorded audio and "real" audio as film progresses.

CRIES AND WHISPERS

DISTANT VOICES, STILL LIVES

NASHVILLE

OTHELLO
Long shots accompanied by close-miked dialogue, etc.

THE SHINING
Incorporation of pre-composed music and blocking actors to the music
(Bartok, Pendereczki, etc.)

JAGUAR, Jean Rouch
selective sounds from the environment

 

 

SPACE: OFFSCREEN

CARNAL KNOWLEDGE
Candace Bergen: occupies frame and reacts to the two men at either side.
Jack Nickolson: occupies frame and reacts to the couple outside of frame.

RESERVOIR DOGS
Ear cutting scene: pan to "Watch your Head".

 

 

TITLES AS CHAPTER HEADINGS

RESERVOIR DOGS
Mr. White, etc.

HILLARY AND JACKIE
"Hillary’s Story", "Jackie’s Story"

THE SHINING
Inverted pyramid of dramatic thrust: the interview, 6 months later, 1 week later, tuesday, friday, Monday morning, tuesday 8am.

 

UNDERSTATEMENT

UNSTRUNG HEROES
dir: Diane Keaton. Death scene at end.